Talk:Yom Kippur War

The result is inconclusive, not “Egypt victory”

It is getting tiring with how useless bringing up this topic is and how it falls on deaf ears, but the second the result of this war gets changed from “Israeli victory” it gets reverted immediately. This is a bias that is not even present on the Hebrew Wikipedia, and makes Wikipedia’s policy of neutrality falter

Here are why the result of this war are “inconclusive”

https://time.com/6322802/yom-kippur-war-israel-history/

“ In 1973, Egypt’s goal in crossing the Suez Canal was to force Israel to the negotiation table to make a peace deal and get back control of the Sinai peninsula. According to Avi Shilon, a historian who teaches at Tel-Hai College in Israel, “The Egyptian and the Syrians didn't plan to conquer Israel. They planned to hit Israel and to force Israel to go into negotiations. For them, it was enough to hit Israel to show that they can beat Israel in the first days, and they preferred to stop, so it was easier for Israel to launch a retaliation attack.”

This outlines Egypts goal of the war, which was to cross the suez and not conquer Sinai or Israel proper. Israel counterattacked, but they failed to repulse the Egyptian army occupying most of the suez

The Israeli military failure to capture two small towns in their supposed legendary encirclement that Wikipedia uses to construct the basis of the delusion of “Israeli victory”

A declassified CIA document

https://www.cia.gov/readingroom/docs/1975-09-01A.pdf

The CIA asserts is as a fact that the war was inconclusive.

Not only that, but mentioning Israel was “100 kn from Cairo” is another perpetuation of Wikipedia delusion. If I am 50 metres from a house, and I step outside and take two steps it is not worth mentioning I am 48 metres from it. Israel’s starting point was the Suez Canal, “100 km from Cairo” is another form of coping, to legitimise a victory that doesn’t exist The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 08:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

The first conclusion is your own, not a specifically stated result in the source. The second, while it does at least say "the fact is that the war ended on a militarily inconclusive note." on page 24. However, this is a 49 year old primary source report made 2 years after the events - it lacks any information gathered since. It was released in 2012, so it has been available for historians to use in secondary works for over a decade.

You will get a lot more traction using WP:secondary sources from reliable military historians. The article already uses these to support a different conclusion though. (Hohum ^@) 15:13, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

Several sources do describe it as a stalemate or inclusive, far from the “Israeli victory” oversimplification, which isn’t even correct neither militarily nor politically

Many sources regard the war as a stalemate, even on the Syrian front

https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/1974/03/who-lost-the-yom-kippur-war-a-military-inventory-of-the-middle-east/670833/

Here Henry Kissinger states “it would be a nightmare if either side won”, implying neither side got a conclusive victory

https://nsarchive.gwu.edu/briefing-book/henry-kissinger/2019-08-09/kissinger-told-soviet-envoy-during-1973-arab-israeli-war-my-nightmare-victory-either-side-soviet

This one is hidden by a paywall

https://www.lemonde.fr/en/history/article/2023/10/02/50th-anniversary-of-yom-kippur-war-the-enduring-ambiguity-of-pax-americana_6143516_157.html

The new Arab, I am not sure if it’s RS, also states that it is a stalemate

https://www.newarab.com/analysis/october-war-nothing-bloody-stalemate?amp

“Which had nearly resulted in Israel’s defeat, but ended in a stalemate”

https://www.historytoday.com/archive/no-victor-no-vanquished-yom-kippur-war

This is ignoring Israel’s defeat at two small towns during the final battles of the war, as well as an air battle, which saw an Egyptian victory. “Israeli victory” also COMPLETELY ignores the result of the war, seeing Israel actually come to negotiate Sinai which is had adamantly refused in the [[Rogers Plan]] and [[Jarrings Plan]], both before the war The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 17:35, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

"You will get a lot more traction using WP:secondary sources from reliable military historians. "

Shotgunning google search results isn't helpful. Kissinger "implying" is actually you inferring. (Hohum ^@) 17:44, 24 June 2024 (UTC)

I’ve given plenty of secondary sources no? What would “if either side had won” would otherwise imply? The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 05:23, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Henry Kissinger memoranda of telephone conversations – or telcons – from October 1973, uncovered by the National Security Archive, provide blunt and fascinating vignettes from a significant moment during the Nixon presidency. In one record about the Yom Kippur War, the secretary of state candidly tells Soviet envoy Anatoly Dobrynin it would be a “nightmare” if either side won.

The leading sentences, and the tense of the statement make it very clear that he is speaking before the war has ended.

You are also ignoring half of this sentence: "You will get a lot more traction using WP:secondary sources from reliable military historians."

Don't expect another reply unless you provide useable sources that explicitly support your point. (Hohum ^@) 17:56, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

Frankly, the war being “an Israeli victory” can be disproven with common sense instead of some strange criteria about the species of sources considering you have been dismissing everything I provided even though it is beyond sufficient to explain why the “result” is something from an alternate history timeline. But here we go, hopefully this is good enough.

https://bootcampmilitaryfitnessinstitute.com/2021/11/23/what-was-the-yom-kippur-war-1973/

“Despite being surrounded, the Third Army managed to maintain its combat integrity east of the canal and keep up its defensive positions, to the surprise of many. According to Trevor N.

Dupuy, the Israelis, Soviets and Americans overestimated the vulnerability of the Third Army at the time. It was not on the verge of collapse, and he wrote that while a renewed Israeli offensive would probably overcome it, this was not a certainty.”

There are some military men who argued that the encirclement would have destroyed the third army, let’s look at what David Elazar, one of the generals during the war said according to this source

“According to David Elazar, Chief of Israeli headquarters staff, on 3

December 1973: "As for the third army, in spite of our encircling them they resisted and advanced to occupy in fact a wider area of land at the east.

Thus, we can not say that we defeated or conquered them””

And further

“Shortly before the ceasefire came into effect, an Israeli tank battalion advanced into Adabiya, and took it with support from the Israeli Navy. Some 1,500 Egyptian prisoners were taken, and about a hundred Egyptian soldiers assembled just south of Adabiya, where they held out against the Israelis. The Israelis also conducted their third and final incursion into Suez. They made some gains, but failed to break into the city centre. As a result, the city was partitioned down the main street, with the Egyptians holding the city centre and the Israelis controlling the outskirts, port installations and oil refinery, effectively surrounding the Egyptian defenders”

Showing an Israeli failure at the defeat too. This is also not mentioning the fact that Wikipedia completely ignores the effect of the war and its result which led Israel to negotiate after adamantly refusing 2-times pre war

The CIA says it’s inconclusive

Several sources and military analysts say it’s inconclusive

Israeli generals say they couldn’t defeat the Egyptians

Yet Wikipedia is adamant to simply this war with the most incorrect, misleading, and simplified result that ignores reality itself The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:35, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

So, after failing to gain consensus, you just go ahead and make changes which have led to many reliable sources which frame the war as an Isaeli victory being discarded, and add few pretty poor ones that say it's inconclusive. diff. (Hohum ^@) 00:37, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

I agree, the result should say "Israeli victory" there's no consensus to change that, please put that back Andre🚐 00:50, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

The result being “see aftermath” does not seem to be disputed either way. The aftermath section is more comprehensive, and explains why the result is not an Israeli victory. It has several sources, including Israeli officer David elazar who resigned after the war, stating that they had been unable to defeat Egypt in the war. I have included several sources and citations, including books that demonstrate the result of the war was a stalemate on both fronts

Do also note, that I initially said “inconclusive”, which has been changed to “see aftermath” which is usually the case with wars that have controversial results, and this is a notable example of such. The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 07:20, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

Disagree. 1) No consensus for your changes. 2) See aftermath clearly shows that military historians agree it was an Israeli victory in the war, which is why that is what the infobox should read. Andre🚐 07:29, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

The aftermath section very clearly states how it is a stalemate, and not an Israeli victory. If I am not mistaken, you initially assumed that this was the six day war (and it’s fine, the wars were close and had the same belligerents so confusion is possible)

The “Israeli victory” does not seem to be established, looking through the old page archive it is a simplification of the old result (Israeli tactical victory, Egyptian pyrrhic victory, and the un ceasefire) about a decade and a half ago. The assertion of “Israeli victory” is also disproven by the page’s very lede, which shows that Egypt was able to successfully achieve its goals in the war (capture eastern suez, and negotiate the rest of the Sinai peninsula), both of which did happen The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 09:06, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

That's OR and SYNTH. Every history text clearly establishes. We have about 20 references. More importantly, you've not established a consensus for your changes here. And I have no idea what you're referring to about confusion with the 1967 war. That seems to be a groundless assertion. I'm bringing this to WP:NPOVN. Andre🚐 18:35, 9 September 2024 (UTC)

I think it’s a good place to discuss it there. I’ve seen the message there and will participate too The Great Mule of Eupatoria (talk) 04:58, 10 September 2024 (UTC)

What's the point of reaching a consensus when someone can simply dismiss it years later? Pending a new consensus, the old version should stand. Mikrobølgeovn (talk) 21:35, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

I agree, there's really not an argument to have "inconclusive" since all military historians call it an Israeli victory. Politically, I can see that it was a major problem for Israel but that is very different. Andre🚐 21:39, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

Atrocities

"Syrian atrocities", "Egyptian atrocities" but no Israeli atrocities? That would make it an almost unique war, or suggest a bias in Wikipedia. (Athough Wikipedia is almost uniquely manipulable by determined actors as a result of its anyone-can-edit method of updating).. 86.160.95.7 (talk) 19:46, 2 October 2024 (UTC)

Do you have WP:reliable sources which document Israeli atrocities? (Hohum ^@) 16:25, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 6 October 2024

I request to edit some information regarding the results of the war 2A02:CE0:2002:6A8E:6480:4DF0:DB14:326E (talk) 22:39, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. MadGuy7023 (talk) 23:06, 6 October 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 16 October 2024

Change "The close distances during night engagements, negated the usual Israeli superiority in long-range duels." to "The close distances during night engagements negated the usual Israeli superiority in long-range duels." This removes an unnecessary comma. The sentence is located in the third paragraph of the section "Defense of the Quneitra Gap". TedWinstonIII (talk) 16:16, 16 October 2024 (UTC)

 Done TheWikiToby (talk) 17:19, 16 October 2024 (UTC)

Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 14 December 2024

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Dear Wikipedia Editors,

I would like to request a revision to the article on the 1973 Yom Kippur War. The current text oversimplifies the conflict by implying that Israel won, which does not accurately reflect the military and diplomatic outcomes of the war.

While Israel's military managed to regroup after early setbacks, it is important to highlight that Egypt achieved its primary objective: the successful crossing of the Suez Canal and the regaining of significant territory in Sinai. Egypt’s forces inflicted substantial losses on Israel’s military and held their positions during the initial stages of the war.

Moreover, after the war, Egypt initiated peace talks, leading to the Camp David Accords and the eventual return of Sinai to Egypt. This was a diplomatic victory for Egypt, as it achieved its territorial goals without further military conflict.

Israel, while not completely defeated, had to concede significant territorial losses by agreeing to withdraw from Sinai. Therefore, Egypt's military success, combined with the diplomatic resolution, demonstrates that Egypt achieved its key objectives and can be considered the winner of the war.

Please consider updating the article to reflect a more balanced and accurate account of the war, emphasizing both Egypt's military achievements and the diplomatic outcomes that led to the peace settlement.

Thank you for your attention to this matter.

--- 197.165.235.115 (talk) 20:13, 14 December 2024 (UTC)

 Not done: way out of scope for a simple edit request, has been discussed thoroughly, repeatedly, and frequently in the past. recommend checking out the archives of this talk page before engaging in more discussion Cannolis (talk) 21:56, 14 December 2024 (UTC)